This is what we have used to initially mark your coursework. This is a beautiful piece. Well done. There is some fantastic camera craft on display - beautiful composition, focus pulling, general framing. The light from the wardrobe work really well. You have also directed your sister really well Ella. Editing is very good - some lovely eyeline matches. A couple of things to improve. 1. Make the title remain on screen for a couple of seconds longer - it appears and then disappears far too quickly. 2. The sound - do you have permission for using the music and are you sure that you have not broken copyright? Make sure this is clearly evidenced on your blog. 3. Cut the music at the end as it continues to play long after the end of the film.
Overall we have awarded this 36 out of 40 - High Level 4 - excellent. Well done (in particular Ella who did the lions share of the work on this).
POSTER - we have awarded it 9 as it stands (We felt Ella's was the best of the 3 submitted). It can get 10 if you clear up the inconsistency in the font on the two reviews. Talk to me about this and I will explain.
The Review - as it stands it is not formatted and is heading for disaster. This needs to be addressed urgently. Kieren - you should ensure that this gets formatted into the correct In design template.
Not completely finished, just uploaded to help with the evaluation
ReplyDeleteThis is what we have used to initially mark your coursework. This is a beautiful piece. Well done. There is some fantastic camera craft on display - beautiful composition, focus pulling, general framing. The light from the wardrobe work really well. You have also directed your sister really well Ella. Editing is very good - some lovely eyeline matches.
ReplyDeleteA couple of things to improve.
1. Make the title remain on screen for a couple of seconds longer - it appears and then disappears far too quickly.
2. The sound - do you have permission for using the music and are you sure that you have not broken copyright? Make sure this is clearly evidenced on your blog.
3. Cut the music at the end as it continues to play long after the end of the film.
Overall we have awarded this 36 out of 40 - High Level 4 - excellent. Well done (in particular Ella who did the lions share of the work on this).
POSTER - we have awarded it 9 as it stands (We felt Ella's was the best of the 3 submitted). It can get 10 if you clear up the inconsistency in the font on the two reviews. Talk to me about this and I will explain.
Overall well done.
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The Review - as it stands it is not formatted and is heading for disaster. This needs to be addressed urgently. Kieren - you should ensure that this gets formatted into the correct In design template.
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