Mise en Scene Representation of Class
Camera Representation of Age
Editing
Sound
*NOT COMPLETE*
About
a Girl
Long shot of the main chaeacter as a
silhouette
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The
scene opens with a long shot, and silhouette of a girl singing Britney Spears.
It is clear that is the evening and she is by herself.
Medium close up of main character
walking
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The
audience is then taken to a Medium Close Up of her walking and it is easy to
determine that she is at least under class from her choice of clothing and
accessories, for example, hoop earrings and a padded white coat. Her choice of
clothing is inexpensive and practical, suggesting that she does not come from a
background of wealth. Again, the character is on her own, which could suggest
that she might not have many friends, or perhaps she doesn't enjoy spending
time with people. Her accent immediately tells the audience that she is from
the midlands, around Manchester. She could be perceived as under class by her
use of vocabulary; it's very limited and she often uses the word 'thingy' for
words she cannot use to describe something based in the topic that she is
talking about. She also uses a lot of profanities, which could suggest that she
is not well educated and she is used to saying words like these.
Close up of main character -
background chaging
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as time progresses
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The
background as the main character walks in constantly changing. In the
background of the shots the audience can see council houses, along with, flats
and terraced houses suggesting that she lives in an under class area. Graffiti
is also noticeable in the background of some shots. This makes the area seem
run down and a dismal place for someone to reside.
Another medium close up with a
different background
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Within
the diegetic dialogues she claims that she is 13 years old and teenagers are
known typically from their random changes of thought as the audience is able to
pick up as the main character is speaking. She begins a topic with Jesus
becoming a singer and then to the Bono (the frontman of U2), moving on to
dental floss and ending with checking someone for worms. This could compliment
the sudden changes of background material shown to the audience. The dialogue
is used as a sound bridge throughout the short film as it overlays a lot of the
various scenes shown to the audience.
It
is easy to tell that the main character is very ambitious since she talks about
wanting to become a singer, subtly suggesting that this is the way she wants to
overcome her poverty. The main character elaborates on her musical ambition as
she is shown on public transport with her 'mates' as she calls them, and
they're all singing together at the back of a bus. However she has limited
horizons of what the high life actually consists of, she believes that wealthy
people go out and consume Baccardi Breezers at an expensive restaurant. She
becomes smug at this point as she points out that her mother will have to
continue consuming dodgy burgers and knock off lager, again suggesting that she
doesn't come from a background of wealth.
An Extreme Long Shot of the main
character watching her father play football
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In
a Medium Shot she is shown sitting with her dad at a cafe and they're
conversing about how she cannot come and live with him, suggesting that that
her parents are no longer in a relationship, adding to her troubles as an under
class teenager. She also claims that he is unemployed resulting to another
reason why she isn't well-off. People who are part of the under class are often
given benefits to live off. Having her father being unemployed could also
suggest a reason why he's unable to let her live with him.
The main character sat alone outside
the pub
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Spending
time with her father is shown to the audience as her just watching him play
football with his friends and then sitting outside alone with a packet of
crisps and a can of coca cola. This could suggest that her father doesn't want
a lot to do with her, resulting in her feeling neglected and lost for guidance.
This also represents her age as in some pubs around the UK, minors are not
allowed to enter.
The lighting used in all of the outside shots is natural lighting which subtly becomes darker as the time progesses, however, the audience doesn't really notice this unless further observed.
The
main character begins to talk about not being allowed to have a pet dog.
Think about your format Cheski.
ReplyDeleteWhat you write, your analysis is good. However it is a wal of text. you need to begin to add screen grabs, use colour, vary font sizes etc. Link to the film as well. Remember that all of these things are referred to in the mark scheme. Level 2